Re: Fic discussion

(Anonymous) 2018-08-14 11:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Gone to the Dogs, 173k Natasha Romanov/Maria Hill fic, set just after Natasha turns herself into SHIELD and SHIELD isn't sure what to do with her yet. I read about 25k and was enjoying the slow burn, but I finally gave up on it because the POV changed between Maria and Natasha almost every paragraph, and I couldn't handle it anymore.

Re: Fic discussion

(Anonymous) 2018-08-14 11:52 pm (UTC)(link)
gah i hate it when there's pov changes every paragraph it's too confusing and ultimately frustrating

Re: Fic discussion

(Anonymous) 2018-08-15 01:00 am (UTC)(link)
DA

My fear with fic that has PoV changes like that is that I'm actually reading a repurposed RP log. Power to the people who enjoy doing it, but especially when the fic is explicit, it can start to feel awkwardly like I'm eavesdropping on two people cybering.

Re: Fic discussion

(Anonymous) 2018-08-15 08:21 am (UTC)(link)
i hope they got the partner's permission to post it as fic